Torn World; Comments on 'Story Rites'

Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management. Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally. On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

Layla Lawlor	Oh, this is a really lovely story. :) The image of Pumice's body revolving in the river currents is a very striking one, and I really enjoyed the poignant feeling of the story, especially bookended by the rangers' matter-of-fact way of dealing with the realities of their lives. Nicely done.
Amelia Margetts	Featured in LJ Community's Writing and Artwork Spotlight 1-14-13!
PeggyB	I really liked this one. Nice insight into how close the members of an age-set are... and how precious the Snowies are for the Northerners.
Rhiannon Rose	This was eerie and touching. A nice look into the a sad event in life of a ranger, and a nice bit about Birka as well.

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