Comments on 'Dance To Fend Off The Sky'
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|Amelia Margetts||Featured in LJ Community's Writing Spotlight 3-29-2011! And again 10-28-2014!|
|Non-Member Artist||This is a wonderful story! I have no experience with Torn World, so perhaps my comments aren't as useful to you, but I was very impressed with the character you've created. The concept of the whistles intrigues me... whether or not it was your idea to begin with (I have no idea), you've written it in such a way that I understood from the beginning what was going on. The character's feelings about freedom from human interaction were concisely put, but very understandable. I like that she chooses goats over humans, yet the ending suggests she might change her mind. Wonderful piece, and a great one to introduce me to the Torn World!|
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