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Comments on 'The Flight of the Rose Butterfly'

Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management.  Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally.  On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

Non-Member ArtistI really enjoyed this story, though my experience of learning to play an instrument was not like this--the instruments I learned I loved from the start, even when I couldn't play them. I loved the sounds that they made, and I just knew there were possibilities in them I couldn't reach yet. I was only worried about whether I would ever be *able* to reach them. But I'm sure different musicians are different, that way. I also really like this concept of a "team instrument." The closest thing I can think of in Real Life (TM) would be the courting dulcimer, though one could argue the four hands style of piano comes close.
Ellen MillionThis is so fun - and reminds me so much of learning to play the piano as a child! I may be biased, but I do love the Rai and Bai dynamic. :)
Amelia MargettsFeatured in LJ Community's Writing Spotlight 2-22-2011!
Lorna (Comtessa)I loved this. Just thinking of Rai and Bai all young makes me smile. Such a beautiful story!
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