Comments on 'Everberries'
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|Sofia Lindström||I love the imagery of the unicorns, the way their vocalization is pointed out really helped me picture the scene (and I'm usually terrible at visualizing, so that's a true compliment I promise!) In fact, all of the environmental descriptions were lovely and gently guided me into this world. There as just the right amount of exposition smattered in, hidden among the slice-of-life bonding and chatter. I feel I know the snow-unicorn riders' culture a little better now.|
|Amelia Margetts||Writing and illustrations featured in LJ Writing and Artwork Spotlight 8-23-2011! And once more 11-10-2015|
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