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Comments on 'Everberries'

Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management.  Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally.  On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

Sofia LindströmI love the imagery of the unicorns, the way their vocalization is pointed out really helped me picture the scene (and I'm usually terrible at visualizing, so that's a true compliment I promise!) In fact, all of the environmental descriptions were lovely and gently guided me into this world. There as just the right amount of exposition smattered in, hidden among the slice-of-life bonding and chatter. I feel I know the snow-unicorn riders' culture a little better now.
Amelia MargettsWriting and illustrations featured in LJ Writing and Artwork Spotlight 8-23-2011! And once more 11-10-2015
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