Torn World; Comments on 'Rocking at the Edge of the World'

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Sofia Lindstrom

That's certainly a dramatic way to reunite the world! I enjoyed Rrilm's point of view. Her perspective let the tension build slowly and also dropped hints about what kind of life she'd lead up until that point and about her culture that left me wanting to know more. Also very curious to know what happened on the other side of that barrier! Those poor people got a full vulcano outburst - if there are any people near that mountain, that is. So many questions!

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