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Comments on 'What a Warsailor Has To Be'

Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management.  Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally.  On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

mikka<giggles> Even small, land-bound thunder whales are terrifying!
Amelia MargettsFeatured in LJ Community's Writing Spotlight 9-20-2011! Again 5-12-2015!
Non-Member ArtistOoh, great twist! I really wasn't expecting it! Amanel has quite the imagination. Maybe he'll be a storyteller when he grows up. Or a warsailor!
Rhiannon RoseOh, this was fantastic. Just when I was getting really into it, there was that adorable twist. It totally worked.
Elizabeth BarretteI love this story! The twist at the end is terrific. It's a wonderful look at childhood and at warsailor culture.
Edward CammarotaI still play in puddles, so I totally apreciate the skill it takes to confront the dreaded puddle monster.
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