Comments on 'On Rails'
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|Holly H.||Okay, I assume they planned the elevator breakdown with the two of them in it, but NOT the earthquake. ;-) Side note: oh my god, TRAPPED IN AN ELEVATOR IN AN EARTHQUAKE. Nope, nope, nope. Anyway, I love how this is not only “trapped in a small place together” but also the “trap them together where they have to huddle for warmth” trope, very good. It was interesting to see the limits of Ressa’s ability to figure out Bai’s issue here, although of course she got there in the end. (But oh, Ressa, if you only knew how likely it really is that Yeff got those tickets in a black-market kind of way!)|
|Rhiannon Rose||I'm really enjoying the overarching plot with Ressa and Bai, and this was a worthy episode continuing the storyline! <3|
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