Comments on 'It's the Little Things'
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|Holly H.||I’m looking forward to going back and reading more about Olarali’s background, to find how she’s connected with Jarl and the underworld, and what brought her to this point. I feel for her that she, too, is being used, and so she doesn’t even really have the satisfaction of seeing the plot come together. Even though things seem to be going as the conspiracy has planned that isn’t doing HER very much good!|
|Non-Member Artist||I'm really enjoying this story. It's great to be able to see Olarali's view on things as well as Bai's - that mix of point of views is one thing I really like.|
|Lorna (Comtessa)||Can't believe I didn't comment on this? How could I not! A fuming Olarali is a dangerous thing to be around! I love it!|
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