Comments on 'Railplay, Pt 2'
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|PeggyB||Poor Bai!!! I really felt with him here. I liked how you picked up several other story lines here with hints to Olarali and Layla/Dini. I am glad I started reading stories about the Empire. I feel less intimidated by the complexity of this society since.|
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