Comments on 'The Girl Who Wanted Too Much'
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Sofia Lindstrom | Love the rhythm this has to it! I can absolutely hear this being sung in a tavern or told around a campfire in late evening, a story and legend passed down for generations. The warning in it is clear and feels genuine, like an echo of something that actually happened, if dressed up a little in more artistic words and retold a few hundred times. |
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