Comments on 'Nomess Mithoirarv'
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|Holly H.||It was interesting to see this story as a smaller-scale reflection of the clearly large-scale events going on in the entire city. It does a lot to convey the way things impact the common citizen. (It seemed a little odd, on the one hand -- as if this was a “reaction” story to a main story, featuring main characters, that we haven’t seen. But on the other, it does a good job to establish those events through this street-level pov.)|
|Amelia Margetts||Featured in LJ Community's Writing Spotlight 10-9-12!|
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