Comments on 'Reaching for the Moons'
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|Amelia Margetts||Featured in LJ Community's Writing Spotlight 1-15-13! Once more 6-16-2015!|
|Uneide||I love the narrative, as it reminds me of outings with my son. The thrill of exploration, trying new cuisines, the souvenirs... all such familiar experiences that make learning about this place feel real. Really enjoyed seeing Denel's relationship with her boys and Jerumal, and the hints of how different their personalities are. Well fleshed out and beautifully written.|
|Ellen Million||It's wonderful to see the Pearly Towers in writing! I like this look at the Empire, and Denel's children are adorable.|
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