Comments on 'City of Lights Pt 1: Ithei'
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| Sofia Lindstrom | Loving the ominous built-up! The interaction between the characters is sweet and enjoyable, but the brooding undertone of Emeroma's jealousy and seeming pessimism along with Denel and Jerumal clearly being young and likely naive… Yeah, even if there's nothing outright negative or sinister happening here it's a great set-up for things to come, I think. Creates an atmosphere of "what will go wrong?" |
| Holly H. | A nice introduction for me to Emeroma, Denel and Jerumal. :) And I appreciated how Jerumal's “surprise†for Denel also kind of fleshed out some of the customs of the Empire and its licenses. Although, I have ot say -- while I assume they were, prior to this, considered “engagedâ€, it’s *quite* a cultural difference for a man to be able to spring “hey, we’re MARRIED!†as a surprise! (Hmm; hard to tell if that is something any man might have gotten away with, or if this is particular to Denel, to Jerumal, and Jerumal's relationship with her.) |
| Lorna (Comtessa) | Beautiful. The picture matches perfectly! |
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