Comments on 'City of Lights Pt 1: Ithei'
Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management. Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally. On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!
|Holly H.||A nice introduction for me to Emeroma, Denel and Jerumal. :) And I appreciated how Jerumal's “surprise” for Denel also kind of fleshed out some of the customs of the Empire and its licenses. Although, I have ot say -- while I assume they were, prior to this, considered “engaged”, it’s *quite* a cultural difference for a man to be able to spring “hey, we’re MARRIED!” as a surprise! (Hmm; hard to tell if that is something any man might have gotten away with, or if this is particular to Denel, to Jerumal, and Jerumal's relationship with her.)|
|Lorna (Comtessa)||Beautiful. The picture matches perfectly!|
Or, subscribe and support individual creators!