Comments on 'Paper Butterflies: Only Paper'
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|Rhiannon Rose||This is the first thing I've read in Torn World, and wow. It's a great introduction to the clearly very rule-bound Empire. The end has left me really worried! I hope that there'll be a part 2.|
|Lorna (Comtessa)||This is a precious look into Bai's personality. It immediately captivated me and I am dying to know more. I hope there is a part two!|
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