Comments on 'Out of Steam, Part 3'
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|Holly H.||As always, I appreciate the little details in all of this -- Malaamig's observations of the way the pool has been altered for human use, and the description of Birka re-dressing in her layers. This also made me wonder what the Northerners are making of the dogs -- I think I remember that the North doesn't have wolves? But they do have foxes! (But I am sure we will get Birka's or others' viewpoints on this soon!) And his hesitation over his old injuries, and their reactions, are interesting.|
|PeggyB||The end works best if one had forgotten about Malaamig being... eh, special. At least I had and found it pretty cute that he made such a fuss about getting out of the water until the real reason was finally pointed out.|
|Elizabeth Barrette||I'm glad to see the South/North storyline moving along. This is exciting!|
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