Comments on 'Out of Steam, Part 4'
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|Holly H.||Lots of great details in here! Kalitelm definitely makes an impression, I like her already. And it’s still tantalizing to see what looks like almost-breakthroughs in the language. I’m very interested to see where that goes. (There could be lots of reasons, at this point, that Kalitelm seems to understand the word “sick”, or that Malaamig seems to recognize some words here and there. I’m not yet sure what it means.) (At least, at the time of first reading, I wasn’t sure what it meant! I have a better understanding of how that’s all working now, and it’s much clearer.)|
|PeggyB||I hadn't had imagined Kalitelm bing so comanding and in charge... but I liked it.|
|Elizabeth Barrette||Yay! Kalitelm is impressive.|
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