Comments on 'Turned Back'
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|Holly H.||It’s interesting getting to read this as a first introduction to Dareg. I came back to read this once I got access, but previously had read further on, and thus knew more about Dareg from reputation. And not the best reputation! This being his POV, it makes him a bit more sympathetic, and yet at the same time I still get a sense of his sizable ego coming through. I feel for him not getting to continue to Smokewater! But the news IS awfully exciting!|
|Elizabeth Barrette||I think this really turned out well. It's a good look at Birka and Dareg, how they deal with challenges, as well as advancing the overall storyline.|
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