Comments on 'Breaking Trail, Part 3'
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|Holly H.||Oooh, interesting stuff! Enjoyed the brief byplay with Dareg, even if I obviously don’t yet have the full history there to appreciate Birka’s hesitation. It’s also very interesting to me that Birka does seem to know what canines are, even though the trained dogs are clearly unfamiliar to the Northerners. I look forward to finding out more! (The North having foxes does account for that, of course.) What an ending, though!|
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