Comments on 'Holding Down the Camp'
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|Holly H.||Poor Diren! There is nothing like being stranded alone with your increasingly disastrous thoughts. (Though it’s very interesting in the midst of that to get a peek at the way his and Margaa’s relationship developed, and the reasons he might blame himself for her being there with him. Of course I’m sure she would refute that notion, but you can understand his worries.) This ending was exciting, too, but I think as a reader I know what’s up more than Diren does!|
|Elizabeth Barrette||I really like seeing the contrasting view from the base camp, where nobody knows what's going on yet.|
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