Comments on 'Winterheart (Part 1 of 3)'
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|Holly H.||This is the first Northern story I've read, so it was really wonderful that it was so wide-ranging and touched on so many aspects of Northern life! Tekura makes a really nice viewpoint character for that, as he moves between various social circles. I feel like I learned a lot, and was interested to see where various threads lead. (I also broadly knew about the destruction of Itadesh and the arrival of refugees to Itrelir, so it was a welcome surprise to actually see that this story was a view of the moment when that happens.)|
|Amelia Margetts||Featured in LJ Community's Writing Spotlight 12-10-13!|
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