Comments on 'The Lichenwold Crossing (Part 8 of 8)'
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|Holly H.||Ah, that was exciting! Excellent action. Glad it turned out all right (or I hope it did, and there’s no lingering problems for the snowies)! And I was glad that it shook them all into talking to each other and clearing the air. The ending feels nicely triumphant, through the awful lichens and on into new territory!|
|Ellen Million||This is one of my favorite series here at Torn World - adventure! Conflict! A little romance! The look at these characters is compelling and I can't wait to read (and write!) more about them.|
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