Torn World; Comments on 'Milk in the Morning'

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Holly H.

A nice look at common chores, especially snowy milking! (10 gallons! wow!) And it’s always fun to see them comparing notes on things outside of their respective frames of reference. I liked how this ended on another of those: differences in body language and cultural norms of touching others. Things like that are more effective at creating a sense of different cultures than even differing experiences or levels of technology.

Amelia Margetts

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