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Comments on 'Milk in the Morning'

Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management.  Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally.  On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

Holly H.A nice look at common chores, especially snowy milking! (10 gallons! wow!) And it’s always fun to see them comparing notes on things outside of their respective frames of reference. I liked how this ended on another of those: differences in body language and cultural norms of touching others. Things like that are more effective at creating a sense of different cultures than even differing experiences or levels of technology.
Amelia MargettsFeatured in LJ Community's Writing Spotlight 1-28-13!
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