Comments on 'Waking in Strange Places'
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|Holly H.||It’s very interesting to get Kativa’s viewpoint, for the way it contrasts with Birka’s. Not just because she’s so young and bouncy, but because she’s a little less thoughtful, but interestingly so. Like her slight lack of sympathy in wondering why the southerners are camped where and how they are, rather than considering herself WHY that might be. I also liked that, in the end, she had this socially-based hesitation for the idea of going to the South. That seems very real, and a nice contrast with the idea that “everybody” would want to go.|
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