Comments on 'One Night in Itrelir'
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|Holly H.||This paints a good picture in few words. :) I especially like the sense of hesitation it gives to both Birka and Anler, for different reasons. Her not wanting to pry, with Fala. Him thinking about beads and choices (which we will see play out later.) Tiren really seems to have the right idea!|
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