Comments on 'Chosen'
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|Holly H.||Perhaps the selection wasn’t really a surprise (to us readers), but I’m glad to see that team chosen. :) (Dareg did not win any points with me with his observation, any more than with those listening to the report in that room.) I like the feeling between them that they’re already a team. (Though I do wonder about Fala refusing… is that ONLY connected to the problem with Tiren?)|
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