Comments on 'Fall of Duty'
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|Holly H.||Ahhh. I had a bad feeling about poor Tovilarn as soon as I realized what must have caused the outage, and how high up he was. I’m definitely starting to get a sense of the outlines of this problem the City of Lights is facing -- I already knew the Others were a problem the higher you get, and it seems like this city was built very high. I feel bad for the fellow, but it’s a consolation to know he left his family in a good position.|
What hit him?|
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