Comments on 'City of Lights Pt 2; Ithai'
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|Holly H.||Oooh, exciting! Great to get a look at some of the “politics” of the Scientists. Nice to get some more characterization on Oranaan; I like the way he’s written here, the abrupt subject changes work well. Having just recently read a Northern story about Others, I immediately recognized what must have done that to the tower, even if I didn’t yet know about all the physical effects it would case. Am definitely interested to see how this develops!|
|Uneide||Emeroma is wonderful. I think she'd get along famously with a character of mine. ;) Btw, does she have more interaction with Jerumal from this point on?|
|Lorna (Comtessa)||An amazing follow up to part one. I can feel the anguish and also the questions raised. Very much looking forwards to more!|
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