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Comments on 'Rules are Rules'

Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management.  Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally.  On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

Non-Member ArtistI really liked this. First off, because the relationship between Ressa and Bai, despite the hinted at future romance, is still very low-key and the chemistry between them yet very explicit and tangible. It's a tough balance to hit, but you did so perfectly. I also liked how Bai's problem with the filed license seemed to seep into his view on Ressa - as if he really wanted to approve it or have Ressa tell him that he could do so next time, because it might mean something implied about his own relationship to her. Well done!
mikkaI rather want to see the other side of this story, from the point of view of the would-be couple. Poor Bai, stuck with all the decisions nobody else wants to make.
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