Comments on 'Wild Snowy Chase, Part One'
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Amelia Margetts | Featured in LJ Community's Writing Spotlight 4-17-12! |
PeggyB | I really enjoyed that introduction into village life of the Northerners. Interestingly you managed that the story flows althought there are so many names and people the reader might not have any association to. It was easy just to take them for granded and not wondering. Good job! All the little hints at the Upheaval caught me. Looking forward to finally read the rest. |
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