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Comments on 'Railcrazy'

Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management.  Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally.  On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

Holly H.Aww, I feel for Yeff. On my own commute, I sometimes wonder how the bus drivers can stand driving the same route over and over again, day in and day out. I guess I sort of do the same, myself (to get to the bus), but it’s different since I only answer to myself, and COULD stop or take different routes if I wanted. Anyway, I also like the idea here that what Yeff yearns for is the ROMANCE of the rails, something that’s hard to put into words. I do wonder how long his enchantment with the other routes would last… but I absolutely find myself hoping he gets the chance to find out.
Rhiannon RoseWell, it's good to have dreams, right? I bet he can make it! The key to success is persistance!
Non-Member Artisthahaha it sounds like what im going to be like when i get out of school =P...i need to get my "technologys"(science)..and math up! hehehe
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