Comments on 'Asleep'
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|Holly H.||It’s nice to get a look at Oranaan’s routine from his viewpoint, and this story creates some intriguing set-up for the future plot (between the mysterious rotund gentleman, the stolen sketchbook, and the interesting bookie who seems to be offering a reward out of proportion with the favor he’s asking). It’s a shame that it seems like the intended next two parts of the story weren’t written.|
|Non-Member Artist||Dirty politics and a somewhat naive genius. Recipe for disaster or the greatest streak of luck ever seen. I am looking forward to the next two stories in this arc.|
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