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Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management.  Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally.  On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

Holly H.It’s so interesting to see a less-sympathetic character, finding ways to be trouble within the scope of Northern culture! Areluu may have become an adult, but she still has a lot to learn, doesn’t she? I can see her attitude and approach leading to greater trouble down the road. (I’m interested to see her in more contemporary stories.)
Amelia MargettsFeatured in LJ Community's Writing Spotlight 9-7-10!
Lorna (Comtessa)How could I not like this? You have written the characters perfectly and it really feels that everyone is known and close.
Deirdre / Wyld_DandelyonI do like this story! It shows a crucial moment in the characters' lives, and an example of how an event that would bring many people closer instead drives these two young women further apart.
Non-Member ArtistSome of this story hits very close to home. I guess there are people in every group who can never forgive you for being alive. Sad commentary on the human condition. Well written and evokes in me alternating emotions of triumph and loss, envy and forgivness. It also makes me want to see what happens when they are much older and more mature.
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