Comments on 'Railrage'
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|Holly H.||Oh boy! Yeah, if I was Yeff, I would feel EXTREMELY unsettled by this too! It’s all too much of a coincidence, isn’t it? In particular, with the note in the previous story that there’s a list of applicants and he was working his way to the top of that list… I’d be very suspicious if I got a position because a couple of people were murdered! YIKES! I’m very interested to see what he’s going to do about it!|
(As an aside, I’ve got to look up more about the Assassins Guild. That just opens up a ton of other questions, for me…)
|Deirdre / Wyld_Dandelyon||Oooooh, creepy! I'm ready to read the next part of this story!|
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