Comments on 'Storm Wrack'
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|Amelia Margetts||Featured in LJ Community's Writing Spotlight 5-24-2011! Again 5-19-2015!|
|Non-Member Artist||Nifty story! You seem to have a misplaced pronoun, though: "When roi classmates found out she was to test and presumably graduate early, they started to harass ru in the library and even at roi home." Also, I found the italicized pronouns kind of distracting. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more things set in this world, though!|
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