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Comments on 'Jerumal'

Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management.  Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally.  On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

PeggyBFor some reason I like your color choice here. The grumpy face looks cool, too. I wonder what he is brooding about.
Non-Member ArtistI really like the way you drew the glass and his hands, and this really shows off his character - he looks quite full of himself. :) The pose seems a little awkward to me - he doesn't appear to be sitting on that bench, is all - but apart from that! :)
Elizabeth BarretteHe looks handsome, but so full of himself. It's a fussy outfit he's wearing, too -- look at all those tiny buttons down the front.
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