home

RSS
Log in or Register to enjoy more features of Torn World!
New to Torn World? Find out more about our shared-world project here!


Sea Monsters!
home
musefusion
start here
start here
stories
poetry
art
reference
map
timeline
articles
characters
creators
join us
forum
subscribe

submit work
karma
credits
contact
staff
log in/out

New to Torn World? Find out more about our shared-world project here!

Vote for us at
Top Web Fiction!

-->

Comments on 'Fala the Leader'

Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management.  Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally.  On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

Sofia LindstromAn interesting introduction to the snow-unicorn people's way of raising children! I know I'd never be able to let so young children rush about in that manner, but that this story brought me enough into this culture's point of view that I definitely could believe/understand their mindset. Fala's youth sure wasn't without its thrills!
Amelia MargettsFeatured in LJ Community's Writing Spotlight 07-24-12!
Ellen MillionThis is the first story that someone other than me wrote in Torn World, and I was thrilled by it. I can't wait to see more of Fala!
Lorna (Comtessa)Love his. Especially the play on words with 'Fala the Leader'. A beautiful story!
Login to add or edit your comments.

Back to Top | Home Page


Home | Characters | Art | Fiction | Articles | Contact | Privacy Policy |Member Login

Donate to support our operating and promotional costs!
Or, subscribe and support individual creators!

[Concept and Site Design: Ellen Million | Website basecode: Ron Swartzendruber]
[No portion of this site's content may be used or copied without prior, written consent.]