Comments on 'Fala the Leader'
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|Sofia Lindstrom||An interesting introduction to the snow-unicorn people's way of raising children! I know I'd never be able to let so young children rush about in that manner, but that this story brought me enough into this culture's point of view that I definitely could believe/understand their mindset. Fala's youth sure wasn't without its thrills!|
|Amelia Margetts||Featured in LJ Community's Writing Spotlight 07-24-12!|
|Ellen Million||This is the first story that someone other than me wrote in Torn World, and I was thrilled by it. I can't wait to see more of Fala!|
|Lorna (Comtessa)||Love his. Especially the play on words with 'Fala the Leader'. A beautiful story!|
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