Comments on 'The Bones of Need'
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|Holly H.||This is a good, short introduction to Dlameda’s dilemma… and the ethics of the choice to start groom Kalitelm as a potential healer, or not. You can feel her youth, but also her determination! But it’s still good that Dlameda is asking himself whether this is a true calling for her or not.|
|Amelia Margetts||Featured in LJ Community's Writing Spotlight 4-9-13!|
|Ellen Million||I love origin stories, and this is no exception. It's great to see a young Kalitelm, and I am always happy to see Dlameda. So many stories-to-come hinted at here!|
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