Comments on 'The Lichenwold Crossing (Part 3 of 8)'
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| Holly H. | Exciting descriptions of the exploration and the physical challenges of the landscape! I could certainly feel the tension of wondering whether rockslides would happen. And I appreciated the calculations they were having to do about taking an easier but longer route, or trying the more dangerous, faster one. While it wasn’t specifically mentioned, I was remembering the problem that they are having to carry all of their fodder for the snowies with them, and they can’t hunt for their own food in the Lichenwold either. That’s a real consideration.
I was a little surprised that the rangers don’t already know whether adult snowies will drink snowy milk. It just seems like something that some ranger would have tried at some point in the last few hundred years, and that it would be a known husbandry thing. |
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