Comments on 'A Working Model'
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|Holly H.||Hmm! I think this is a piece I’m going to have to come back to, in order to understand its context. I’m not sure I’ve seen reference to the engine before, and I’m not sure whether the conclusion about its explosion is a comment on the actual engine, or on something going wrong with Oranaan’s version.|
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