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Comments on 'The Making of a Scientist 2: An Experiment In the Park'

Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management.  Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally.  On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

Holly H.Oranaan really does make a better teacher than one might expect! (Frankly, before this, I would have wondered if he might be too self-centered to take an interest in the students.) It’s also nice to see Lidi (who was so memorably introduced) given some equally memorable companions. Amaroin should be fun to see develop, and Iraffa is intriguing, and I look forward to finding out what’s going on with her.
Ellen MillionIt's so nice to see Oranaan start to act a little more responsible, and to see him in a role of leadership, rather than... er... his usual rascally chaos.
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