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|Holly H.||HAH! This was my first real introduction to both Bai and Ressa (I’d read a story about Bai’s childhood before, and don’t feel that really counts), and it did a great job of setting them both up for me! On the one hand, Bai’s reservations seem logical, particularly once you understand the scope of problems caused by his predecessor. Why trust the choice of hiring Ressa any more than any of the other things the guy did? But I just knew Ressa would meet the challenge; and not just because I know she’s an ongoing character. :) Even with the answers we get in this story, though, I still have the impression that there’s things yet to be discovered about why Ressa left her work in the Carnal Guild for THIS job… or maybe that’s just because I find it hard to believe that this job is all that attractive a position! But those are things I look forward to finding out.|
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