Comments on 'Senseless, Part 1'
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|Holly H.||Oh! I’m glad to see this moment when the Northerners noticed the barriers had come down! And of course it’s no surprised that the two young, new adults are going to go exploring the tunnel on their own, despite the decision of the older rangers. The decision may have been sensible, but that isn’t satisfying to an explorer’s spirit!|
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