Comments on 'Senseless, Part 3'
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| Holly H. | I too noticed, just before it was mentioned, the reversal in Imain’s and Reqem’s moods, and roles, for the time being. Fortunate at least that they’re not both despairing! I also liked the sort of call-back to the earlier part where it was mentioned that confinement in a village all dark winter would be torture for active youngsters… and then the note of what this prolonged experience of sensory deprivation is indeed doing to them. |
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