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Comments on 'Cure or Cause?'

Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management.  Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally.  On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

Holly H.It was a lot of fun to see these three butting heads! Especially since at this point, I know Oranaan and Emeroma through stories, but this is my first introduction to Draiden. He’s very much as I expected him to be, but I was surprised and delighted by his attempt to get Emeroma to go to dinner with him at the end! :) Even if it had an ulterior motive (or three), it was still a nice touch. (I almost regret that we don’t get to see how such a dinner date would go!)
Amelia MargettsFeatured in LJ community's Writing Spotlight 6-30-2010!
Toni SturtevantHa! I love it! I think they are both in trouble, and so is Oromaal!
Lorna (Comtessa)LOVE it! Poor Draiden doesn't have a chance with her!
Valerie Joanne HigginsThat was very bold and cheeky of him, you have a charming rascal of a character there, great fun.
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