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Comments on 'It's Not Magic, It's Science!'

Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management.  Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally.  On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

Holly H.Hah! Great to get a detailed look at Oranaan’s process. This story did a great job of demonstrating that he IS brilliant -- the compass he built undeniably worked -- but also clearly he’s a loose cannon and people don’t trust him; and the fact that it started falling apart was a great way to underscore that, not to mention his fixation on the fact that it worked, brushing aside that failure in a way that seems perhaps a little TOO cavalier. (It’s also very interesting to learn that the Others -- the anomalies -- leave a “trail” like that, though I thought I understood that they were gone and not lingering.)
Non-Member ArtistOh, Oranaan is delightful! I hope someone appreciates him soon. He cracks me up.
Rhiannon RoseHah!! I'm enjoying following this saga, and this was an especially enjoyable installment. Poor Oranaan... no one appreciates his highly excitable genius.
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