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Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management.  Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally.  On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

Non-Member ArtistI agree, seeing the city-fed scientists paired with the dour outdoorsman is a treat. I like this group, and how patient Malaamig is with them. This is a very well told tale, and one that I can really empathize with. It has happened more than once where I set out on a long trip into the wild all agog at the beauty to the point where I forget how hard nature can be and how humbling it is to realize that when you put civilization at your back, there is very little left for you to control. This was a sobering and inspiring story. Can't wait to see where they go next!
PeggyBOh, I feel with the two scientists, not used to physical exertion at all. ;) I like how science-y Diren and Margaa seem to be: overly enthusiastic and prone to lose sight of the whole, big picture while concentrating on the small things committedly. Nice to see them in contrast to practical Malaamig.
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