Comments on 'The Butterfly Girl'
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|Non-Member Artist||This is lovely. I really like the descriptions of Akaalekirth's nervousness and the fact that she sees more than Iffarir gives her credit for.|
|PeggyB||I must admit I am really fascinated by the Rainbow forest. Lovely and promising world building idea and nice introduction into it with those two characters.|
|Amelia Margetts||Featured in LJ Community's Writing Spotlight 2-1-2011!|
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