Torn World; Comments on 'These Heels Were Made for Bedding'

Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management. Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally. On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

Ellen Million

I commented at the forums, but not here - I absolutely love this story! The descriptions are a delight, and Olarali is such a joy to read about. I want to see the shopkeep come back in another story!

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