Torn World; Comments on 'Velvet Monsters and Ribbon Waves'

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Edward Cammarota

I liked the story, but it felt unfinished...I know a lot of these stories are continued at a later date, but this felt like it ended halfway through a thought. I liked this enough to want to read more, but was dissapointed where it ended...sorry.

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