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Comments on 'Kin and Ink'

Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management.  Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally.  On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

PeggyBIt's always so fascinating to see your work progress. I remember this one being a pencil sketch from the Muse Fusion and here we see the finished version with inks, shading and dots (of course, dots :) ). I really like her face here, she seems like she finally arranged herself in the Forest and is happy with her life. The platforms look great, too... but I would not dare to sleep on one of those.
Non-Member ArtistWeirdly, it's the perspective on this one that makes me happy (and the butterflies, because butterflies make everything good.), and well as your lovely lines. I really like the way you've drawn the platforms round the trees, and the lines of washing. I admit that the ladder in the background confused me for a second, because you can see some of the background through it but not all. It's a lovely picture.
Lorna (Comtessa)Beautiful! I want to live there.
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